Plus, until about four months ago, I didn't know what the hell people meant when they said, "Show, don't tell."
The Book Doctor at PNWA, whose name is escaping me, gave a badass example of what showing verses telling is.
I'll share this life altering information with you, with an example I'm gonna make up here on the spot.
Are you ready?
Here it is:
Telling:
Baxter is the best dog, ever. (Of course I'd pick a Baxter reference.)
Showing:
After we'd both undergone surgery, I went upstairs to take a nap. As per doctor's orders, Baxter stayed downstairs after taking some medication. Soon enough, I heard his paws clumsily making their way up the stairs. He staggered to the side of my bed. One paw at a time, he army-crawled onto my blankets, still careful not to be on me. Together we napped, him at my feet, me at my pillow.When I woke up, blood started pooling out of my mouth. Though Baxter had just gotten his nuts chopped off, and was probably in pain himself, he saw (or smelled? You pick) the blood and started whimpering and nuzzling me until I pet him and told him I was okay.
Do you get the idea? I didn't just tell you Baxter is a ballin' dog, I showed you why. (This may be a kind of lame example, but it's a true one...and it may give you guys some insight as to why he appears so regularly on my blog :) ) The Book Doctor went through and explained examples of when it's appropriate to tell rather than show..but I don't remember when those times are...so once I dig out those notes, I may post about that, too :)
Anyways, hope you guys have a great night. I'm gonna start falling behind on blogging again, I start my new job tomorrow. Wish me luck!
Good luck!! I hope you have a great first day :)
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