If you missed segment one, it was the hookers of chapters, those glamorous sentences that keep you from putting that book down and tell you you can pull through one more chapter. If you get the chance, go around to the other author blogs. They will not disappoint you!
Today, we're focusing on the hangers, the last sentence of the chapter where you sit there and think, "OMG!" and keep reading though it's 2am and you have to be up at 5am for work.
Hangers from After Elizabeth (YA Contemporary) in no particular order:
In the place of sorrow, I found fury. Pure, unadulterated, uncontrollable, fury.
"I run alone," she states, re-hardening, and bolts.
Even though I'm going to get expelled.
If I don't exist to Claire Davis, maybe I'm not real.
It was the beginning of the end. We never should have gone.
But, I find myself thinking, at least she's my neighbor.
Ready for this to be over, I checked my watch. We still had four minutes left of our ten minute run.
There would be a score to settle very, very soon.
Who is this girl?
And the last one I'll put up for this:
Then there are the mother fuckers, like Chad Higgins, who recognize the rope, and push people like
This was an awesome blog hop! Thanks Falling for Fiction! I hope you guys got to scope out the other entries, too!
Also, check out Monday's post for a contest happening here at The Submission Process!
Love these. Again, I'm totally drawn to this story! Well done!ReplyDelete
Yay! Thank you very much!Delete
So good! I thought the first one was my favorite until I read "If I don't exist to Claire Davis, maybe I'm not real." Oh, the angst! Love it :)ReplyDelete
Thanks! The non existing one is one of my favorites, too :)Delete
I really like the 1st one, these are great!ReplyDelete
Really great lines. I love the one about there being a "score to settle." :DReplyDelete
Love the not existing line! All of these were amazing! :)ReplyDelete
Most of the comments are saying the not existing :). I think it's my favorite, too :)Delete
These were all really good. I like the not existing one a lot.ReplyDelete
Thank you very much!Delete
These are all fantastic! Great work!ReplyDelete
I really like this one: "If I don't exist to Claire Davis, maybe I'm not real." Although the "beginning of the end" one is great too...ReplyDelete
Thanks! A lot of commenters like the existing one, too :)Delete
Good job! This one is fabulous. If I don't exist to Claire Davis, maybe I'm not real.ReplyDelete
Nice endings, and agree definitely the last one got my attention. Enjoyed reading your hangers.ReplyDelete
"We should never have come." I love the solemness of this statement.ReplyDelete
Thank you. It is my MC Claire speaking about what happened to Elizabeth :)Delete
Your last one cracked me up. Good job!ReplyDelete
I generally try to drop the f-bomb into all of my young adult works...I swore a lot in high school :)Delete
Oh I like these. 1 and 8 are my faves, those could so easily go into my story. Seems we have a sense of revenge in our story telling :)ReplyDelete
:) Usually anger and revenge.Delete
All great hangers. Makes me want to see what happened in the chapters right before.ReplyDelete
Totally laughed at the last one. Great job!
Two thumbs up for #4 :D I liked the last one too ;)ReplyDelete
Both of those have gotten the most comments, lol. Thanks so much for stopping by!Delete
Wow, your writing feels really raw. I love that. That first line is so powerful. Definitely a follower now. I'm really glad for this bloghop. :DReplyDelete
Thank you very much! And this blog hop was great! It was awesome meeting you via twitter and blog-o-sphere :) Thanks for following!Delete
I love the emotion in the first one! :)ReplyDelete
All of them are really strong, but I think your final one was my favorite! :)ReplyDelete
Some great hangers here! "If I don't exist to Claire Davis, maybe I'm not real." Great voice!ReplyDelete
Love the tone and the voice you've got going here! Great hangers Lynne!ReplyDelete
Very good! These sound intense. Well done!ReplyDelete
It is a pretty intense novel. Thanks!Delete
The first one is awesome. I get the feeling this is a fast-moving book.ReplyDelete
Thanks! And I hear it moves pretty fast, a beta told me that she read it in a day.Delete
The last one got me!ReplyDelete
Mission accomplished :) Thanks!Delete
#1 is my favorite. Fury is such a good word.ReplyDelete
I think f-words might just rock. I prefer the f-bomb, but fury is good, too :)Delete
I really like the score settling one. But I have to go with this one for the bad words (I love bad words):ReplyDelete
Then there are the mother fuckers, like Chad Higgins, who recognize the rope, and push people like Elizabeth off.
I'm a huge fan of naughty words, too :)Delete
I remember really wanting to read this book after the hookers. And you do not disappoint with these hangers. Especially that last one. What a great one!! I'd keep reading for sure.ReplyDelete
Yay! And if you're willing to beta, I'm always looking for people to read ;) Thanks for the compliments!Delete
This has me totally intriguedReplyDelete
Even though I'm going to get expelled.
What is she going to do!?!?!
He got into a fight at school :)Delete
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